The diagram below shows time spent watching TV by age and gender in the UK in 1995 and 1999
The given bar chart illustrates the amount of
time
allocated to watching TV
in a particular age
group
(from 4 years
old until over 65 years
old) both for males and females weekly in Britain in two different years
(1995 and 1999).
Overall
, the amount of time
spent watching TV
in England underwent an upward trend for women in every group
of age
, except for men in childhood, teenage, and adult group
of age
. The highest number in allocating time
for watching TV
was in elderly people, and the lowest was in the children age
group
.
Looking into detail, it is clear that
people in the age
group
over 65 years
old allocated the most time
to watch TV
accounting for over 30 hours
compared to those in the 4-15 group
of age
only contributing under 20 hours
per week. Similarly
, people 55-64 years
old donate more than 25 hours
weekly, while
those 45-54 years
old only gave below 25 hours
over the given period.
Furthermore
, the figure for the 25-34 age
group
allocated just about under 26 hours
per week compared to those in 4-15 only
contribute under 20 Correct pronoun usage
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hours
per week.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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