Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements.

Students

are hard-working folks who try their best to improve themselves, so it is only reasonable that they are rewarded for their efforts.

However

, it is how

schools

decide to spend their budget on

this

matter

that is

debatable. Whether they should spend their resources on

students

that are making progress or

students

that have actually achieved something, we are going to discuss both views and give a firm opinion about

this

. Achievers will be the only

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benefiting if

schools

choose the latter

strategy

. Giving rewards is a way of showing appreciation to someone. It is clearly reasonable to reward

students

who actually achieved, but it is still unfair

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those who

also

strive for improvement

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.

Furthermore

, the number of

students

that actually manage to succeed in achieving is not great,

hence

only a few actually benefit from

this

. Only achievers will be lifted, supported and loved, and the vast majority will sink into the deep sea of despair.

This

strategy

clarifies the dark side of most school systems: you are only praised when you are good, but no one cares if you try your best to improve without achievements. The other

strategy

,

however

, is more logical. We define “strivers” as someone who devotes themselves to

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something.

This

term is undeniably wider than the term “achievers”.

This

includes those who spend most of their time behaving well and doing their best to actually achieve, which logically includes “achievers”. With

this

strategy

, none will be left behind,

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slackers, of course. It is a better way to reward

students

, both those with high effort put into their work and those with actual achievements

while

also

snapping lazy folks back to reality. It does seem to cost more, but it is truly worth it. I don’t think

schools

mind paying more to make everyone’s school lives better. After all, it all leads to a better society where

students

get less depressed, where

students

have fun studying, where

students

consider

schools

their

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, and where everyone strives for a better community. In conclusion, it is highly recommended that

schools

adapt

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the

strategy

of rewarding

students

who strive for the better, and not only the “achievers” mentioned in the second paragraph. Regardless of any

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system, I sincerely hope that

students

in

this

day and age will not suffer from any kind of mental illness and continue to improve themselves for the better.