are hard-working folks who try their best to improve themselves, so it is only reasonable that they are rewarded for their efforts.
, it is how
decide to spend their budget on
matter
debatable. Whether they should spend their resources on
that are making progress or
that have actually achieved something, we are going to discuss both views and give a firm opinion about
.
Achievers will be the only
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benefiting if
choose the latter
. Giving rewards is a way of showing appreciation to someone. It is clearly reasonable to reward
who actually achieved, but it is still unfair
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those who
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.
, the number of
that actually manage to succeed in achieving is not great,
only a few actually benefit from
. Only achievers will be lifted, supported and loved, and the vast majority will sink into the deep sea of despair.
clarifies the dark side of most school systems: you are only praised when you are good, but no one cares if you try your best to improve without achievements.
The other
,
, is more logical. We define “strivers” as someone who devotes themselves to
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something.
term is undeniably wider than the term “achievers”.
includes those who spend most of their time behaving well and doing their best to actually achieve, which logically includes “achievers”. With
, none will be left behind,
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slackers, of course. It is a better way to reward
, both those with high effort put into their work and those with actual achievements
snapping lazy folks back to reality. It does seem to cost more, but it is truly worth it. I don’t think
mind paying more to make everyone’s school lives better. After all, it all leads to a better society where
get less depressed, where
have fun studying, where
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, and where everyone strives for a better community.
In conclusion, it is highly recommended that
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the
of rewarding
who strive for the better, and not only the “achievers” mentioned in the second paragraph. Regardless of any
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system, I sincerely hope that
in
day and age will not suffer from any kind of mental illness and continue to improve themselves for the better.