write a short paragraph (about 150 words)about your village/city

I live in a suburb which is my beloved country.In my household the scenery is beautiful.There are many tall buildings,companies,supermarkets, bookstores,upmarket shops, and shopping malls.City residents can buy food and order to their homes easily.
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,for young,active people like teenagers nowadays,my land is an ideal place for them to their horizons or find a better job.Urban life may be easier to apply for a job because of its diverse job.In my , land home it is a vibrant nightlight.All the clubs and karaokes are open from 7pm to 2am.The most thing that I impress in the city is the hectic pace of life.Even at night or in the morning the burg is always noisy and crowded.The place of interest is Cam Duc market,with a lot of things to see.I love to go there to buy food and clothes and watch other people buying and selling.My beloved hometown is worth living in.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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