The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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amount

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the amount

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of people, who visited a European country from 1987 to 2007. There are three different areas for visitors to get into,

particulary

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particularly

the coast, the mountains and the lakes.

Firstly

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, it can be highlighted that quantity of

coast

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coastal

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visitors slowly decreases from 1987 to 1992, and

than

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then

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rapidly grows till 2007.

Secondly

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, the line of

mountains

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mountain

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travelers

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travellers

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slightly goes up roughly equal for the whole period of time.

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,

thle

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the

line for visitors

of

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to

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the lakes is rising at the first part of the graph, and after 2002 sharply goes down.

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, it can be observed, that seeing mountains is much less popular compare to the rest of

areas

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the areas

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referes

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refers

to

amount

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the amount

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of

travelers

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travellers

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. In

counclusion

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conclusion

,

instead

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of the difference

of

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in

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patterns for each

places

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,

the

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a

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similar rising trend can be

highlaighted

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highlighted

. Much more people for each area

visits

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visit

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the place in 2007

compare

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compared

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to 1987.