The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph reveals
amount
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the amount
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of people, who visited a European country from 1987 to 2007. There are three different areas for visitors to get into,
particulary
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particularly
the coast, the mountains and the lakes.
Firstly
, it can be highlighted that quantity of
coast
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coastal
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visitors slowly decreases from 1987 to 1992, and
than
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then
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rapidly grows till 2007.
Secondly
, the line of
mountains
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mountain
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travelers
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travellers
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slightly goes up roughly equal for the whole period of time.
Lastly
,
thle
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the
line for visitors
of
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to
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the lakes is rising at the first part of the graph, and after 2002 sharply goes down.
Also
, it can be observed, that seeing mountains is much less popular compare to the rest of
areas
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the areas
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referes
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refers
to
amount
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the amount
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of
travelers
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travellers
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. In
counclusion
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conclusion
,
instead
of the difference
of
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in
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patterns for each
places
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place
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,
the
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a
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similar rising trend can be
highlaighted
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highlighted
. Much more people for each area
visits
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visit
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the place in 2007
compare
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compared
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to 1987.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "goes up" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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