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It is believed that secondary school children should study international news as one of their school subjects. Others think that this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

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There is an ongoing debate regarding the usage of global media to educate young scholars. A group of individuals believe that
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multiracial news should be taught to secondary students as
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 subject for their holistic growth.
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, others opine that it would totally be
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 of precious schooling tenure.
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, I would like to argue that global newsflash must be addressed to younger ones during their
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 the benefits. Examining the former opinion, the supporters would put forward is, it would enhance the knowledge of teenage scholars. They would be more mature
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 if they get indulged in some serious international topics.
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 would feel much
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 after having the conversation at multi-edge level issues.
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, a survey conducted by Oxford Sociologists depicted that media influences heavily teenagers' knowledge of contemporary affairs,
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 making them aware
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 the world.
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,
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 awareness makes them global citizen and encourage
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, those in
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favour of
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 opinion have their own arguments. First and foremost
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, young individuals' first duty is to cover up
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 of their
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studies
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 to gain fruitful grades to achieve their goals. If they would get
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 their paramount study materials. They could be in
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 to choose first over the others. To exemplify,
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 in their study, they are lacking in
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academic grades day by day.
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,
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 and offer my position, there are convincing arguments both for and against teaching
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international news to secondary children
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 the impinge effects on academic qualification.
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 I certainly favour the former opinion.
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