The diagram shows rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.
The diagram illustrates the production of drinking
water
by collecting rainwater in a local area in Australia.
It is clear that
there are 6 main stages in this
process, beginning with getting rainwater from the roofs of houses and ending with the resulting products as a cleaned beverage for household use.
As can be seen, during the first step, water
from the rain is conveyed from the roof of the house through a drain which leads to a filter. Here, the water
is treated to become cleaner before being transferred to a huge tank underground for storage.
In the fourth stage, once stored, water
is brought to another container where it undergoes a special treatment process. Next,
various chemicals are added in order to purify the liquid carefully to eliminate all the left substances. In the end, a pure drink is pumped via a pipeline to houses for different human consumption.Submitted by danphamngocha on
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