The diagram shows rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.

The diagram shows rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.
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The diagram illustrates the production of drinking
water
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by collecting rainwater in a local area in Australia.
It is clear that
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there are 6 main stages in
this
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process, beginning with getting rainwater from the roofs of houses and ending with the resulting products as a cleaned beverage for household use. As can be seen, during the first step,
water
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from the rain is conveyed from the roof of the house through a drain which leads to a filter. Here, the
water
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is treated to become cleaner before being transferred to a huge tank underground for storage. In the fourth stage, once stored,
water
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is brought to another container where it undergoes a special treatment process.
Next,
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various chemicals are added in order to purify the liquid carefully to eliminate all the left substances. In the end, a pure drink is pumped via a pipeline to houses for different human consumption.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • rainwater harvesting
  • rooftops
  • drains and gutters
  • underground storage tanks
  • water treatment plant
  • purification
  • filtration
  • chemical treatment
  • impurities
  • microorganisms
  • distribution system
  • potable water
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