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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents.in your letter Explain why you would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Collins, My name is Saied, I have seen your advertisement in a magazine, and I am writing to you because I consider myself suitable for your offer. I hate living alone, and I want to live with a family. I have to say that I love children. I like
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, and I have enough experience for it, and I know all the ins and outs of my
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. Surely, I am pretty well-informed and really competent for your offer, as my university major is related to my
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. I studied family psychology, and I have an academic certificate and practical qualifications. If I had the chance to get
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, I promise to do my best performance because I am highly experienced and I have worked in
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 in my country for many years, and I used to take care of them. I am well-known for being patient, kind, and hardworking. If I had the chance to live with you, it would be great. I would spend my free time learning English, I study about the culture of your country, and visiting tourist attractions. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. I really would like to work for you. I think it will be a good experience for you and me. Kind regards, Saied
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
  • Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
  • Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
  • Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
  • Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
  • Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment
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