The given table illustrates the data about the independent films released in the UK and the republic of Ireland based on the category of movies in the year 2012.
The table provides information about the release of independent movies in two countries in the year of 2012.
Overall
, it can be seen that there are 10 genre of movies which was released in the Uk and Ireland . However
, there are 148 releases
and got 100% of their income through movies.
To begin
with, the top 5 genres of independent film are comedy, horror, biopic, drama, and crime. Moreover
, the drama category has numerous releases
in both countries, next the comedy films also
has released 26 times.
On the other hand
, the next 5 categories of film are action, documentary, thriller, romance and others. However
, the documentary films had more releases
during the year 2012 in both Uk and Ireland. Furthermore
, thriller, romance and documentary tickets have been sold more and gained revenues to the nations. Moreover
, less
people watched romance and other genre films too. Change the quantifier
fewer
Along with
it the biopic has made less
Change the quantifier
fewer
releases
but gained more income.Submitted by fazilharis20 on
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