The given table illustrates the data about the independent films released in the UK and the republic of Ireland based on the category of movies in the year 2012.

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The table provides information about the release of independent movies in two countries in the year of 2012.

Overall

, it can be seen that there are 10 genre of movies which was released in the Uk and Ireland .

However

, there are 148

releases

and got 100% of their income through movies.

To begin

with, the top 5 genres of independent film are comedy, horror, biopic, drama, and crime.

Moreover

, the drama category has numerous

releases

in both countries, next the comedy films

also

has released 26 times.

On the other hand

, the next 5 categories of film are action, documentary, thriller, romance and others.

However

, the documentary films had more

releases

during the year 2012 in both Uk and Ireland.

Furthermore

, thriller, romance and documentary tickets have been sold more and gained revenues to the nations.

Moreover

less

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fewer

show examples

people watched romance and other genre films too.

Along with

it the biopic has made

less

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fewer

show examples

releases

but gained more income.

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