The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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the

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Norbiton town's industrial area and predicted future improvement of the site.

It is clear that

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there is a

river

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passes

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that passes

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from

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apply

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the

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Norbiton town and the main plan is

making

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to make

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this

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are

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area

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suitable for accommodation

in

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on

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both the south and the north

side

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of

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river

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the river

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.

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the houses will replace factories in the future, some facilities

planned

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are planned

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to be built near the accommodations. In the south

side

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of the

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river

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,river

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it is planned to change factories and create a residential zone for people. Another plan is

extending

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to extend

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the main roads inside of the town and

constructing

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construct

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a

bride

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bridge

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over the

river

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to connect the south and north

side

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of the

river

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.

Also

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, near the housing plenty of facilities

planned

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are planned

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to be built

such

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as

school

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schools

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, shops, medical

centre

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centres

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and

playground

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playgrounds

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.

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,

in

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on

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the north

side

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of the

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river

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,river

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there is only farmland situated in

the

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apply

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today's map of Norbiton. But in the future with the help of the

bridge

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,bridge

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the road will

constructed

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be constructed

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on the top

side

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of the

river

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.

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, another housing will be ready for accommodation near the road with decreasing the size of the farmland.