The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The pictures provide information about
the
Norbiton town's industrial area and predicted future improvement of the site.
Correct article usage
apply
It is clear that
there is a river
passes
Correct pronoun usage
that passes
from
Change preposition
apply
the
Norbiton town and the main plan is Correct article usage
apply
making
Change the verb form
to make
this
are
suitable for accommodation Correct your spelling
area
in
both the south and the north Change preposition
on
side
of river
. Add an article
the river
While
the houses will replace factories in the future, some facilities planned
to be built near the accommodations.
In the south Add a missing verb
are planned
side
of the river
it is planned to change factories and create a residential zone for people. Another plan is Add a comma
,river
extending
the main roads inside of the town and Change the verb form
to extend
constructing
a Wrong verb form
construct
bride
over the Correct your spelling
bridge
river
to connect the south and north side
of the river
. Also
, near the housing plenty of facilities planned
to be built Add a missing verb
are planned
such
as school
, shops, medical Fix the agreement mistake
schools
centre
and Fix the agreement mistake
centres
playground
.
Fix the agreement mistake
playgrounds
On the other hand
, in
the north Change preposition
on
side
of the river
there is only farmland situated in Add a comma
,river
the
today's map of Norbiton. But in the future with the help of the Correct article usage
apply
bridge
the road will Add a comma
,bridge
constructed
on the top Change the verb form
be constructed
side
of the river
. However
, another housing will be ready for accommodation near the road with decreasing the size of the farmland.Submitted by aslanlijavidan on
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