Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Road casualties take the lives of many chauffeurs and pedestrians every year. Some argue that the best way to reduce them is to have severe penalties for offending freight regulations,

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others think other solutions may work better. I think,

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punishments are helpful,

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other measures should be taken alongside them. On the one hand, careless operators who ignore freight laws play a major role in many arteries accidents.

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, some use their mobile phones

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driving and do not focus on the line, meaning they would definitely not be able to control their cars in time to avoid

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. If

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drivers know they risk being imprisoned or heavily fined, they will probably be motivated to observe driving regulations more closely.

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, penalising driving

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is the quickest solution since it can be applied immediately and the trainer will see the consequences of their faults right away.

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, there are various other means of decreasing the number of transportation

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. Driving license candidates could be required to sit courses aimed at educating them on the virtues of heeding the law

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on the road.

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would allow them to realise how driving carefully could benefit both themselves and the people around them.

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, new cars could be built in

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a way that they restrict the operator’s ability to commit travel

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like illegal speeding or turns.

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, the car’s computer could automatically decrease its maximum speed in residential areas or near intersections. In conclusion, I think any idea that could increase roadway safety is worth trying, so

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driving

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should be heavily punished, solutions like safety classes for new chauffeurs and technologies that prevent

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are

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necessary.