The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The below pie charts compare the
proportion
of
water
usage
in three categories agricultural, industrial and domestic in North
America
, South
America
, Africa, South East
Asia
, Central
Asia
and
Europe
.
Overall
, it is noticeable that farming used is mostly dominant among the provided three areas in the mentioned countries,
while
only industry used is the largest
proportion
of
water
usage
in
Europe
and North
America
. It is
also
noticed that domestic use is the least
proportion
in both of the six countries. The
proportion
of
water
usage
in agriculture in Central
Asia
, Africa,
as well as
South East
Asia
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is 88%, 81% and 84%, respectively,
while
only roughly 70% of
water
usage
accounted for the same purpose in South
America
. Meanwhile, the least percentage of
water
used for farming purposes is in
Europe
and North
America
, at 32% and 39% respectively.
However
, North
America
and
Europe
both have the largest percentage of
water
used in the industrial aspect, which is more than half of the
water
used for it,
whereas
compared to the nations of
Asia
and South
America
are both below 13% in the same category.
Lastly
, the figures for domestic use are mostly the lowest aspect in the
usage
of
water
in the provided countries, which is all less than a quarter.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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