Some people think that not only should professional sports and cultural enterprises be sponsored by the government but also that amateur adult and children groups should get funding. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

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Government
supports national
sports
and culture companies to get
further
in their career and get the nation’s name in the limelight.
People
think that not only should Professional
sports
and big companies get subsidies from the
government
but the
government
should
also
support the average
adult
and
kids
group. In
this
essay, we will discuss why the
government
should not sponsor amateur
adult
and
kids
groups. I disagree that the
Government
should support every amateur
adult
and
kids
group because that will require a lot of funding, which is supposed to be used in other projects, as governments have limited funds for all projects.
Also
, an average
adult
and kid would strive to become good enough in order to receive sponsorship from the authority and they will take inspiration from professional players. If the
government
starts funding everyone,
people
will lose the will to work harder towards their goals. If we look at professional players and enterprises, they have worked harder to reach their destinies and
then
the law supports them as they
also
bring pride to the nation. One must be deserving enough to receive support. Let's take an example of scholarships in the education sector. Students go through hardships to get good marks and secure scholarships. Education sectors do not award scholarships to everyone as they have a limit of earnings too but they do provide it to hard workers, as those bright students will most probably will do something big in their life, which eventually benefits the country. So
this
is why the ministry should not provide free funding to every
adult
and
kids
group.
However
, the union should manage random
events
for
people
who are fascinated with
sports
, as it will surely help to find out some hidden
talents
, participating in those
events
and the winner should get funding. Not only interested
kids
or adults will participate but other
people
will be drawn to
events
too and there is a chance of developing interest in play.
For example
, Imran Khan himself had handpicked many local street players in Pakistan, thinking they would be a really great addition to the Pakistani cricket team. One of those few names is Legendary bowler Wasim Akram. So, we have dormant talent rolling around, waiting for the right
events
and chances. So, the
government
should look out for hidden
talents
. The Essay has argued why should the
government
not provide funding to average adults and
kids
groups like they backing professionals and
also
how should the
government
manage that extra funding to provide chances for some talented
people
except those professional teams and big companies. I would say the state should create more
sports
events
in all areas of the country, with a very minor fee so it can recover some cost too and award the winner of the event, so winners get recognition of their
talents
too as most
people
don’t know about their
talents
. It will really benefit the
sports
lovers, and society and bigger
talents
will be added to professional
sports
.
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