The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize and report the information.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. 

Summarize and report the information.
The charts illustrate the proportion of
water
usage
for different sectors including agriculture, domestic
usage
and
industry
usage
in six different places in the world.
Overall
,agricultural
usage
dominated in Africa,Central
Asia
, and South East
Asia
,South
America
.
Likewise
, the
industry
sector used the highest proportion of
water
in both Europe and North
America
. With regard to North
America
,
Industry
occupied nearly half of the
water
usage
. Agricultural use allocated approximately 40% of the
overall
water
consumption,
however
, domestic use needed only under a fifth of the
overall
ratio.
In Contrast
with Europe , the
Industry
sector required above half.
while
the agricultural part and domestic
usage
reported roughly one
third,
and 15 % respectively. In Africa, Central
Asia
, Southeast
Asia
, and South
America
, agricultural use constituted more than 80% of the total
water
consumption. In South
America
, it accounted for almost 70%. Domestic
usage
and the
industry
sector required only a small proportion, around a fifth of the
overall
water
usage
in Southeast
Asia
. In Central
Asia
, it amounted to approximately one in ten, and in Africa, it was less than a fifth.
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