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The line graphe shows the average temperatures of three African cities through the year. Summarise the information by selscting and reporting the main features. and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph gives information about the average
temperature
 differences in three different cities in Africa over the twelve months period.
Overall
, it is noticeable that there are dramatic
temperature
 changes in Cairo, and
Nairobi
 and
Cape
Town
 experience a similar pattern of
temperature
 movement throughout the year. Looking into details, as regards Cairo, the lowest
temperature
 starts at 19℃ in January
then
 gradually increases and reaches a peak of 35℃ in June. There is a steady decrease from 35℃ in August to 20℃ in January after having a plateau for three months from June to August. It is apparent that
Cape
Town
 and
Nairobi
 have relatively stable temperatures throughout the year compared to Cairo. The temperatures witness the highest at just below 30℃ in February and March in
Cape
Town
 and
Nairobi
 respectively,
then
 moderately drop down to about 20℃ in August in both cities.
Cape
Town
 and
Nairobi
 have a gradual upward trend until the end of year period despite a little dip in November in
Nairobi
. The temperatures are significantly varied depending on the geography and the climate between the three cities.
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