The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services - to the UK economy in the twentieth century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph provides data about the contribution of sectors to the economy of the Uk in the twentieth century.
Overall
, it can be seen that agriculture, manufacturing, business and financial are the sectors which contribute to the government. In addition
, agriculture produced half of the materials, as well as
, contributed one in ten of the period.
To begin
with, agriculture produced half of the items between 1900 and 1950. Furthermore
, it had plummeted in production in 1975 and it produced one in ten goods for the economy of the government.
On the other hand
, manufacturing gave 45 rates of products to the officials of the country in the beginning. Moreover
, it had reduced its production during 1975, it delivered only 30% of goods, as well as
, it got a plummeting in 2000, and manufactured only 15 rates of items. Secondly
, the business and financial sectors showed a rise in contribution during the twentieth century. Furthermore
, it contributed 5% at first,
and drastically rise to 30 rates of contribution to the economy of the Uk.Submitted by fazilharis20 on
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