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The pie charts show the main reason for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The pie charts show the main reason for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The pie charts provide information on the six main
reasons
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 for immigration and
emigration
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 in the United Kingdom during 2007.
Overall
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, individuals travelled in search of definite jobs the most in 2007.
However
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, international students migrated to the UK more than students who left the country for education. It is evident that almost the same percentages of people travelled in and out for the same purpose which was permanent work by 30% and 29% respectively.
Similarly
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 for the Accompany/Join category, immigration was a little over
emigration
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 with just 2%. Moving on, there was a vast contrast between some
reasons
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 why people moved to and from the UK. Students moving in for formal education surpassed those who went abroad to study by a whopping 22%,
in addition
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 to
reasons
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 which were not stated for
emigration
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 doubled for immigrational
reasons
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. The same can be said for the portion looking for work where
emigration
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 recorded 22% over the 12% of immigration.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words reasons, emigration with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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