The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts depict the percentage of
water
used for different purposes around the world and we are discussing this
context in the text.
There are relevances between low-income, high-manpower continents
. In the chart, Asia and Africa use water
mostly for agricultural purposes. While
it is higher in Central Asia, South East and Africa spent little bit more water
for industrial section. The reason for this
is these areas are rich in people and therefore
they are seeing this
kind of the
number of individuals as an advantage. Correct article usage
apply
Otherwise
, In Europe and North America, where most of the developed countries are located, nearly half of the usage of this
restricted source goes for industrial contexts. Because high-income countries do not rely on the number of people but on enhancing technological changes. Also
in the middle of these different charts, you can find South America. This
continent features mostly developing countries such
as Brazil and Chile. Therefore
, in the chart of South America usage of water
for farming occupies three-quarters of the pie. Although
it is still far less in farming content then
Asia and Africa continents
.
To conclude
, while
high-income continents
spent a higher percentage of water
for factorial use, low-income continents
, which have a human advantage, use most of this
source for agricultural purposes.Submitted by mertbora000 on
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