You are studying atan international college and you recently attended a careers day organised by the college to help students prepare for work. The event included information about how to identify suitable jobs, workshops on writing effective job applications, and advice on how to do well in interviews. The College Principal has asked you to write a report evaluating to what extent the event was successful and making recommendations for next year's event. Write your report.

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of a survey I conducted with a random selection of 100 students who attended the act. In the final

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I will make recommendations for possible changes in next year’s event. Results A considerable proportion of those surveyed said that the advice on how to do well in interviews had been incredibly helpful

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and that they would surely make use of it in the future.

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, a third of the

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agreed that workshops on writing effective job applications tended to be boring and dull.

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of the attendees mentioned that those working there had a hard time understanding and relating to them,

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the large age gap.

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, many concurred that the organization was somewhat chaotic and that it was difficult to locate the different groups and talks. Recommendations In light of the results, I would recommend the following: Have a larger number of young workers who will have a more relatable experience. Design a space adequate for the event, organized and clean, to make sure students can navigate easily through the event.