The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services - to the UK economy in the twentieth century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services - to the UK economy in the twentieth century.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The above graph shows data about the contribution of three sectors namely, agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services to the UK economy in the twentieth century.
Firstly
, in the year 1900, the contribution of agriculture is less than 50%, manufacturing is around 45% and business and finance is nearly 5%.
Secondly
, in the year 1950, the Farming sector contributed more than 50%, the production department has nearly 40% and work and accounting services is less than 10%.
Thirdly
, in 1975, the farming sector was contributing the lowest and highest was by production industry with 10% and 15% and the industries and accounting was 20%.
However
, by 2000 the least farming was nearly 5%, a manufactured unit somewhat around 15% and accounting was
nearby
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35%. In conclusion, there is a great change seen from 1900 to 2000. The information is about the sector.
This
report was on three sectors. The data is about 100 years.
It is clear that
businesses have great growth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comparative analysis
  • Declining trend
  • Agrarian economy
  • Fluctuations
  • Industrial advancements
  • Recessions
  • Significant growth
  • Service-oriented industries
  • Dynamic economic structure
  • Traditional sectors
  • Modern service-based sectors
  • Urbanization
  • Technological advancements
  • Global market integrations
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