The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the consumption of
water
for three different objectives by percentage in six different areas of the world.
Overall
, Central
Asia
has the most ratio of
water
usage in agriculture,
however
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Europe
has the least ratio. In the industrial
sector
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we have the opposite pattern,
Europe
uses the most
water
in the Industrial, but Central
Asia
uses the least. For domestic purposes, South
America
is in the top list,
while
South East
Asia
and Central
Asia
are in the bottom list for
water
usage. In the agriculture category, more than four-fifths of
water
is used by Central
Asia
, Africa, and Southeast
Asia
88%, 84%, and 81% respectively. In comparison with other countries South
America
uses less by 10% about 70%. North
America
and
Europe
use
less than 50%, 39% and 32% respectively. In the industrial segment,
Europe
and North
America
use
about 50%. South
America
uses about tone tenths,
however
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others
use
roughly 10%. In the Domestic sector, South
America
,
Europe
, and North
America
use
more than 10%,
whereas
others
use
between 7% to 9%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, asia, europe, america, use with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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