A local council is planning to redevelop its existing civic centre. The diagrams below show the propes changes to the civic centre. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The yielded diagram illustrates a civic

centre

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's present-day view and the future alterations to the site.

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, at first ,glance it is evident that these changes will provide enhancements and construct more underground places that are not available for individuals to utilize.

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, it can be noticed that the high street is on the left corner of the civil

centre

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and smith street is located on the right

side

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, North Avenue is seen in the uppermost direction,

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Victoria Avenue is oriented in the opposite direction. At the present time, the cinema is positioned in the Northern top part of the existing civic

centre

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while

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there is car parking on each

side

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. The exhibition sites are on the western corner close to the town hall and council office and on the southeast

side

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of the

centre

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, the library can be found in the southwest area

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the upward way is the shopping

centre

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. In future, cinemas and shopping centres will persist with no alterations to the same site.

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, the cafe will move to the northeast

side

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car parking place,

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the hotel and restaurant will have a separate parking space. The council office will undergo construction to accommodate the underground library, which eventually will be relocated to an exhibition location.

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, the exhibition avenue site will shift to the south

side

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of Smith Street and Novel underground car parking will be assembled in the town hall.

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