The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The graph illustrates the proportion of Australian
male
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males
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and
female
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females
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in several
age
groups who did regular physical activity in a specific year.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the highest
percentage
of
men
who engaged in playing sport was among 45 to 54
years
,
while
the highest
percentage
of
women
among
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15 to 24
years
.
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in
65
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and over
age
group
male and female has
approxmiately
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approximately
the same
percentage
. Looking at the bar chart in more detail, in
age
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the age
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group
from 15 to 24
years
women
who participate
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the
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pyhsical
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physical
activity highest
percentage
at 52.8 % than
men
at 47.7%.
from
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24 to 34
years
group
the proportion of
men
at 48 .9 % higher than
women
at 42.2. The
higest diffrence
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highest difference
between
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the percentage
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of
men
and
women
was in
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the 35
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to 44
age
group
, the
men
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52.5 % and
women
39.5. In the
age
group
65 and over approximately the
men
and
women
have the same
proporion
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proportion
proportions
who engaged in physical activity at 47.1 and 46.7 per
cen
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cent
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, percentage, men, years, women, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical activity
  • Regular exercise
  • Age demographics
  • Participation rate
  • Trend analysis
  • Gender disparity
  • Health initiatives
  • Public health policies
  • Statistical comparison
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Work commitments
  • Age-related factors
  • Preventative health
  • Exercise habits
  • Surveillance data
  • Motivators and barriers
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