The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The graph illustrates the proportion of Australian
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
in several Fix the agreement mistake
females
age
groups who did regular physical activity in a specific year.
Overall
, it is clear that
the highest percentage
of men
who engaged in playing sport was among 45 to 54 years
, while
the highest percentage
of women
among
15 to 24 Add a missing verb
was among
years
. Furthermore
in 65
and over Correct article usage
the 65
age
group
male and female has approxmiately
the same Correct your spelling
approximately
percentage
.
Looking at the bar chart in more detail, in age
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the age
group
from 15 to 24 years
women
who participate on
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in
the
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apply
pyhsical
activity highest Correct your spelling
physical
percentage
at 52.8 % than men
at 47.7%. from
24 to 34 Change preposition
In
years
group
the proportion of men
at 48 .9 % higher than women
at 42.2.
The higest diffrence
between Correct your spelling
highest difference
percentage
of Add an article
the percentage
men
and women
was in 35
to 44 Correct article usage
the 35
age
group
, the men
was
52.5 % and Change the verb form
were
women
39.5. In the age
group
65 and over approximately the men
and women
have the same proporion
who engaged in physical activity at 47.1 and 46.7 per Correct your spelling
proportion
proportions
cen
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cent
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