The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.
The bar chart below gives information about the percentage
off
spending on five vital categories in the United States, Change preposition
of
Canada
, the United Kingdom, and Japan
in 2009 and it is easy to see that food and housing, transportation accounted for the highest rate, whereas
health care and clothing were lower.
overall
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the three
the
united states spent about 14% on food which was lower than Change preposition
in the
Japan
( about 23% ). moreover
, the percentage of spending on food in the uk
was higher than in Correct your spelling
UK
canada
( 21% compared to 15% ). Change the capitalization
Canada
According to
the bar of housing, america
was the highest rate ( about 26%) and the united kingdom was slightly lower than Change the capitalization
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America
britain
just accounted for about 24%, followed by 23% in Change the capitalization
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japan
and 21% in Capitalize word
Japan
canada
.
in terms of transportation, Change the capitalization
Canada
canadians
spent 20% of their total expenditures, Change the capitalization
Canadians
while
americans
, the Change the capitalization
Americans
british
, Change the capitalization
British
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and the
japanese
from the figure of Change the capitalization
Japanese
category
were just 18%, 15%, Add an article
the category
10
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and 10
uk
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UK
2
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at 2
while
canada
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Canada
japan
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