The charts show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of water consumption for 3 different purposes including industrial, domestic and agricultural use in 6 areas of the world.
Looking from
overall
perspective, it is evident that in Add an article
an overall
the overall
for
territories namely South Change preposition
apply
America
, Africa, Central Asia
and South East Asia
most of the water resources are allocated to farming, unlikely
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it unlikely
the
industrial usage occupies the most amount in North Correct your spelling
that
America
and Europe.
In terms of agriculture, Central Asia
is a leader
consumer with 88% Replace the word
leading
following
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followed
with
Africa Change preposition
by
accounted
for 84% and South East Wrong verb form
accounting
Asia
registered 81%respectively
. Correct your spelling
81 %respectively
Likewise
, South America
utilized 71% of its reservoirs for plantation. Furthermore
, territories which are located in central parts of Asia
and South eastern
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Southeastern
Asia
recorded similar
share of 7% in domestic consumption Correct article usage
a similar
while
it is 9% for African regions. Europe and North America
registered almost similar percentage
in Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
this
section with 15% and 13%respectively. South America
is the lead domestic utilizer with
diverting 19% of its resources to domestic purposes.
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apply
On the other hand
, European and North American countries use their water substantially for industrial aims with
diverting 53% and 48% of their reservoirs to Change preposition
apply
this
section; while
this
percentage is at most14% for Asian areas,19%for South America
and 9% for African territories.Submitted by mohammadmgh1381 on
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