the line graph compares the consumption of fast foods by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000

the line graph compares the consumption of fast foods by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
The line graph compares the
consumption
of three fast foods by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000, over a period of 25 years.
Overall
,
it is clear that
whilst the
consumption
of
chips
and
fish
significantly declined over time, over the period, the amount of pizza and hamburgers that were eaten increased. In 1975, the most popular fast food among teenagers in Australia was
fish
and
chips
, being eaten 100 times a year.
This
number was far higher than that for the other two fast foods, which were consumed 5 times a year. Apart from a brief (small) rise from 1980 to 1985, its
consumption
considerably fell over the time frame to finish at lower (under) 40. In sharp contrast to
this
, teenagers ate pizza and hamburgers at much higher levels. Pizza
consumption
gradually increased until it overtook
fish
and
chips
in 1997. It
then
levelled off at 80 for the
last
three years. The biggest rise was seen in hamburgers as the occasions that they were eaten remarkably increased, exceeding that of
fish
and
chips
in 1997. It finished at the same level that
fish
began, with
consumption
of 100 times a year.
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