The pie charts show the main reason for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The pie charts show the main reason for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
This
pie chart depicts the percentage of reasons for
immigration
and
emigration
to and from the UK in 2007.It is clear from the graph that the most
reason
for both
immigration
and
emigration
is for
the
Correct article usage
a
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definite
job
.
According to
what is shown, the most
reason
behind
immigration
is for a definite
job
which is 30 followed by formal study 26 ,the third
reason
is accompany
Change the verb form
accompanies
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the figure is half definite
job
is 15 after that comes looking for a
job
,other
reason
and no
reason
stated. For
emigration
,which shows the same behaviour as
immigration
,the most
reason
people emigrates is a definite
job
29, followed by no
reason
stated 18 and the proportion of other
reason
is 14 ,the least proportion is for formal study which is 4.
To sum up
,the percentage of reasons for
immigration
and
emigration
differentiate , the least
reason
for
immigration
is no
reason
stated and for
emigration
Add a comma
,emigration
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the least
reason
is formal study.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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