The graphs show changes in spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The graphs show changes in spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001.

Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
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The bar chart illustrates changes in the spending habits of people in the UK for the past 30 years. In 1971, the most of expenses were
petrol
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and furniture,
however
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, both
of
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apply
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petrol
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and furniture diminished
almost
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by almost
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a quarter in 2001. To compare the expenditure on restaurants between 1971 and 2001, it reduced by 11%,
nonetheless
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, the spending on
foods
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food
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was 14% in 2001, people in the UK spend 28% of their spending on eating. There were four projects not changed from 1971 to 2001,
petrol
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, computers, furniture and restaurants.
Besides
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, foods, books and cars were new items in 2001.
Additionally
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, people spend more money on computers in the past 30 years. The spending on books was 1% in 2001 and there was 0% in 1971. In conclusion, even though the spending on
petrol
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were
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apply
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decreased in 2001,
nonetheless
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, the expenditure on cars and
petrol
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were
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was
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51%, it was half of the total spending in 2001.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "nonetheless".
Vocabulary: Replace the words petrol with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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