The graphs show changes in spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
The bar chart illustrates changes in the spending habits of people in the UK for the past 30 years. In 1971, the most of expenses were
petrol
and furniture, however
, both of
Change preposition
apply
petrol
and furniture diminished almost
a quarter in 2001.
To compare the expenditure on restaurants between 1971 and 2001, it reduced by 11%, Change preposition
by almost
nonetheless
, the spending on foods
was 14% in 2001, people in the UK spend 28% of their spending on eating. There were four projects not changed from 1971 to 2001, Fix the agreement mistake
food
petrol
, computers, furniture and restaurants. Besides
, foods, books and cars were new items in 2001. Additionally
, people spend more money on computers in the past 30 years. The spending on books was 1% in 2001 and there was 0% in 1971.
In conclusion, even though the spending on petrol
were
decreased in 2001, Unnecessary verb
apply
nonetheless
, the expenditure on cars and petrol
were
51%, it was half of the total spending in 2001.Change the verb form
was
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "nonetheless".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words petrol with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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