Traffic congestion and housing problems in larger cities could be solved by moving large industries and factories and their employees to the rural areas. What extent do you agree or disagree ?

Traffic

jams and housing issues in larger urban

areas

could be tackled by moving large

industries

and

factories

and their

employees

to the

agriculture

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areas

. I totally agree with

this

statement because moving large

industries

and

factories

and their

employees

to the countryside

areas

can contribute to the

reduce

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the inhabitants in large

cities

in order to mitigate

traffic

congestion and

also

provide create enough spaces for

build

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building

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a new houses

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a new house

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.

To begin

with, there are several reasons why I believe that

encourage

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large

industries

and

factories

and their

employees

to

moving

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to rural

areas

assist

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to

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addressing

Traffic

congestion and housing problems. Regarding

traffic

jams,

motivate

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motivating

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large

industries

and

factories

moving

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to move

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to

country

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the country

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to rural

areas

can contribute to

reduce

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reducing

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the population in large urban

areas

.

This

is because

the

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large

industries

and

factories

have a huge number of

employees

, which means

this

trend can reduce the number of vehicles used by large

industries

and

factories

and their workers .

Therefore

, moving large

industries

and

factories

and their

employees

will help to alleviate

the

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traffic

congestion. In terms of housing, if the government incentivize large

industries

and

factories

and their

employees

to

moving

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move

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the rural

areas

this

will contribute to

tackle

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housing problems.

This

is because the government can use the

areas

of

industries

and

factories

in order to construct

a new accommodations

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new accommodations

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for local people, which trend can create enough

spaces

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space

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for

homes

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home

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construction.

Furthermore

,

this

trend can make the price of housing affordable for people, because

minimize

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the population

on

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large

cities

means more housing available for people in large

cities

with competitive prices.

To sum up

, I strongly believe that

motivate

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motivating

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large

industries

and

factories

and their

employees

to

moving

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move

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to countryside

areas

will contribute to

solve

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solving

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the issues related

of

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to

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housing and

traffic

jams

,

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because it

decrease

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the inhabitants in large urban

areas

as well as

creare

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creates

more spaces for

bulidng

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building

homes in large

cities

.