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The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949-2008. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer identifying the main trends and making comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949-2008. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer identifying the main trends and making comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph given illustrates data regarding renewable
energy
 supply in total and four other main resources in the USA over the period of time from 1949 to 2008.
Overall
, Total and Hydroelectric Power both shared a similar upward trend in
energy
 consumption, rising and falling with some exceptions.
In contrast
, Biofuels and Wind total production showed moderate change compared with other types of
energy
 over the timeline. In the beginning, the total supply of Renewable
Energy
 showed a gradual climb until 1970, when its figures experienced wide-range fluctuations. Surpassed 6
Quadrillion
BTU
 by 2008. Hydroelectric Power steadily increased from under 2
Quadrillion
BTU
 to approximately 3
Quadrillion
BTU
, after which it witnessed
a
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an
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 up-and-down variation and, noticeably, met the point of over 2
Quadrillion
BTU
 three times in three different years, in 1977, 1988 and 2001, respectively. Contrary to the general trend,
Energy
 consumption from Biofuels and Wind remained unchanged until 1981, before a considerable increase of less than 2
Quadrillion
BTU
 by the end of the period.
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