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The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010.

The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010.
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The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of renewable
energy
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 in regard to the total
energy
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 production in four different nations (Australia, Sweden,
Iceland
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 and Turkey) in three years 1997, 2000 and 2010.
Overall
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,
Iceland
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 and Sweden witnessed an upward trend in the use of renewable
energy
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 sources in the three examined years.
Furthermore
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, among the four countries,
this
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 type of
energy
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 was most popular in
Iceland
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. In 1997, almost half of the total
energy
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 produced in
Iceland
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 came from environment-friendly resources.
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 percentage proceeded to steadily climb up to 60% after three years and reached 70% in 2010. Meanwhile, in 1997, only approximately 5% of the entire amount of
energy
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 was generated from natural resources in Sweden, which experienced a similar trend to that of
Iceland
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 to the proportion of renewable
energy
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 produced. Regarding Australia, nearly 10% of the total
energy
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 supply was from renewable resources in 1997,
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 decreased slightly to 5% in 2010.
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, the percentage of renewable
energy
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 produced declined from over 40% in 1997 down to just under 35% in 2010 in Turkey.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, iceland with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • renewable energy
  • total energy supply
  • percentage
  • overall
  • changed
  • increases
  • decreases
  • fluctuating
  • trend
  • highest
  • lowest
  • significant
  • commitment
  • sustainability
  • environmental protection
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