The graph illustrates the proportion of pattern changes of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the United Kingdom

The graph illustrates the

percentage

of households in the UK

have

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been accessing modern technology

in

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four different devices

such

as

home

computer, CD player, mobile phone and internet

access

during the

period

of 1996 to 2002 in terms of

percentage

.

Overall

, it could be clearly identified that

,

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each

an

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and

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every type of modern technology had shown increases trend but among these

trends

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we can demonstrate

home

computer

access

was

increase

rapidly.

However

,

CD

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the CD

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player was the most popular household technology throughout the

period

. In the year 1996/97, the

percentage

of usage of

CD

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the CD

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player

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players

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was around sixty

percent

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(60%) and it had

then

increase

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slightly to a value of approximately 70% after a year and after that, the value had

climb

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slightly passing around 78% and hitting point of 83% in the year 2000 and 2002 respectively.

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the beginning of the

period

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there

was

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were

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no

any

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people

access

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accessing

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the internet

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internet

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Internet

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but after

the

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1998 there was a gradual

increase

to 30% and

then

shown

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slight

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a slight

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increase

to

level

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the level

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of 45%. But out of these technologies

lowest

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the lowest

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percentage

was internet

access

.

In

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the beginning of the

period

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mobile phone usage was less than

home

computers and it was the third largest

percentage

but after one-year 1998 it was outracing

home

computers and mobile usage become

to

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70%

at the end

of the

period

and

it

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rise to

second

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the second

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largest

percentage

.