You have just bought some clothing online and you are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the cloth from. In your email Give details of the purchase Describe the problem Explain why you need a replacement urgently

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Dear Sir or Madam, Greetings! I am writing

this

email to inform you that I bought a pair of jeans and a shirt

last

week on Monday from your online store when the sizes and colours are large and medium and navy blue and cream respectively. I paid a total of 500 dollars with 20 dollars extra charge as well for speedy delivery since I was invited to a birthday party of one of my closest friends, where I had to wear them. Thanks to your delivery team I received partial as quickly as I expected.

However

, I felt a bit dissatisfied since its colours were different from what I have ordered. On top of that, the T-shirt was torn in its right sleeve.

Furthermore

, I have to attend my friend's birthday after tomorrow, where we five friends have decided to wear similar outfits.

Therefore

, I would like to request an urgent replacement for the same sizes and colours. Should you require any information please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully, Shiba Kumar Banjara

Submitted by Shiba Kc on Sun Jul 16 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

176 words

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