The leaders or directors of organisations are often older people. Some people think that young people can also be good leaders. Do you agree or disagree?

Decision-makers and

governers

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are usually the old people in each country,

while

, it is argued that these key positions must be filled by the younger generation. I strongly agree the latter group have more

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ability to manage

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every country. The young are better to take an important responsibility in every government. Having enough information and up-to-date

kowledge

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knowledge

, the younger people are able to solve any problem and play an important role

for

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their countries. Even though

this

generation has

low

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experience, there have been a

myraid

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myriad

number of successful people who have done their tasks properly. Problems are absolutely complicated nowadays,regardless, we need

policy makers

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policymakers

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that have new

ideaes

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ideas

and

knowing

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new methods . The

eldery

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elderly

,

on the other hand

,

are

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appropriate not to take

a

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responsibility.

loosing

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their power, the older leaders cannot do their work. A president or a prime minister

in

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of

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this

age,

for instance

,

are

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not able for participating

on

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substantial meetings or

teravels

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travels

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,

beacuse

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because

this

age group usually get tired and

be

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exhausted

briskely

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briskly

.

Moreover

, A great deal

if

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them could not concentrate completely,

as a result

, making a vital decision would be challenging. In conclusion, The older generation

due to

loosing

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their

vigor

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are

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not able to take the top responsibility in

countriers

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countries

, in stark contrast, the young with their know-how and their energy

are

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better on

mariginal

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marginal

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