The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart illustrates the different origins of air pollutants in the UK during a period of time of 15 years (1990 to 2005). Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the amount of atmosphere contamination, in
this
country of research presents a dramatic decrease in total air pollutants and industry through the years. On one hand, it is possible to observe that the peak of the toxic elements in the atmosphere, corresponding to the total air pollution is close to 7
million
tons accompanied by the industry with an amount of roughly 5.8 commencing in 1990.
However
, these sources had a dramatic fall ending with less than 4
million
tonnes in 2005.
On the other hand
, transport and households started
this
period with nearly 1
million
tons of atmosphere pollution remaining steady for almost the extent of the graph, where transport was stable from 1990 to 2005.
Nevertheless
, households had a gradual fall culminating with less than 1
million
tonnes in the
last
year of the given period.
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