you recently bought a large expensive item but when it was delivered to your home you found some problems with it. Write a letter to the manager of the shop. In your letter Give details of what you bought Describe the problems with your item Say what you want the shop to do

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Jimena Ilaria. I am writing regarding a purchase I made

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week. As a frequent client of your,shop I have to say

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is not the first time I had an inconvenience. I bought a television through the official website of the company and it just arrived. When I opened the package I realised it has some big scratches on the screen. Even though the television is working the screen needs to be changed. If

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latest new LG model is still in stock, I would like to have delivered the same as soon as possible. If it is out of stock, I will check on the website what other televisions your shop offers. Would appreciate in case

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happens to have a discount

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the inconvenience. Thank you for your attention to

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matter, I eagerly await your response. Yours faithfully, Jimena

jimeilaria

Jul 17, 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

149 words

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you recently bought a large expensive item but when it was delivered to your home you found some problems with it. Write a letter to the manager of the shop. In your letter Give details of what you bought Describe the problems with your item Say what you want the shop to do

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