Some people believe if a police force carries a guns, it will encourage the level of violence in the society. To what extent you agree or disagess

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equipping

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is likely to contribute to more

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carrying

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does not mean having lower rates of

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do the same to protect themselves.

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only can be used in extreme conditions so if

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officers have the authority to keep the safety

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society, the same rule can

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apply to

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, who may use

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to do criminal activities

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to prevent themselves from getting hurt.

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, the more

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they carry, the higher rate of

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on the streets. In order to decrease the level of

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, governments should regulate the use of

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for citizens and train

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force properly when facing dangerous situations. Paradoxically, a weapon can promote discipline and reduce crime in the community. Because

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will be aware of the available armed force, they will be less likely to follow offensive activities. Lawbreakers will be more cautious before committing

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the crime rate will deteriorate rapidly.

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experience a more protected environment and will feel secure. The more

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officers have firearms, the more safe and secure our life will become.

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it will encourage the level of

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in society, the

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using

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could curb

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because it could deter people from violating the law and reduce

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escaping from arrest.