the chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018
The bar chart provided information o how the average family in a particular country spent their weekly
income
in 1968 and 2018 ,
overall
, there was significantly high spending between 1968 and 2018 especially in housing and leisure, but ,however
there Add a comma
,however
was
remained stable in household goods.
in 1968 there was a Unnecessary verb
apply
dramaticaly
growth in Correct your spelling
dramatically
dramatic
foods
in weekly Fix the agreement mistake
food
income
unlike 2018
its went Change preposition
in 2018
decrease
, Wrong verb form
decreased
on the other hand
, clothing, and footwear went doubled from 5% of the weekly income
to 10%.
transports and personal goods and also
households goods in 1968 it was above 8% of the weekly income
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