You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event. Write a letter of application to the organisers. In your letter: Explain why you are interest in helping Give details suitable past experience Suggest ways you might help with the event
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to you with regard to the advert in our local newspaper about the charity event which will take place in the city centre park next week, I would like you to be informed that I want to participate as a volunteer.
Firstly
, I am passionate about voluntary work and I am so interested in such
events. Secondly
, these events give me a sense of happiness and satisfaction because I am really doing valuable
thing by helping those people in need, Correct article usage
a valuable
addtionally
, many of my Correct your spelling
additionally
colleages
will be there Correct your spelling
colleagues
in
the same event.
Change preposition
at
Moreover
, I have been participating in a particular event such
as this
one, I have helped other volunteers in collecting and distribution
of old and used items Replace the word
distributing
such
as clothes and furniture. Hence
, I consider myself one of the most active volunteers in our town.
Furthermore
, I have a good idea about the places we can find the items we are looking for, however
, it would take much
time to get the job done, but I suppose that my experience would help us. I will be happy to share Correct quantifier usage
a lot of
this
mission with other the
volunteers.
I am waiting for your kind reply.
Yours sincerely,
Adam WhiteCorrect article usage
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite