This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph represents the statistic of four material types in percentage that were recycled between

years

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the years

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1082 to 2010. Looking from

overall

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an overall

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perspective, it is readily apparent

such

materials as aluminium

upwards

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upward

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the trend throughout the

all designed

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term,

whereas

paper and glass

waste

recycling rise insignificantly. The plastic type of

waste

was relatively stable. In 1982, there was

noticeable

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a noticeable

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progression in paper and cardboard recycling, the same can be seen with

the

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glass containers.

Nonetheless

, paper

waste

was

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witnessed with

unstable

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an unstable

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increase

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the peak point in 1994, and

gradual

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a gradual

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fall to

the

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70 close to 2010 in the same time glass wasting decrease

initially

and

reach

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reached

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the

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its

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lowest point at 40% in 1990. After

what

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that

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the

precentege

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percentage

became rise relatively stable and in 2010

gains

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gained

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60%. Meanwhile, only in 1986

aluminium

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did aluminium

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cans started recycling and that rise

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more than 40%

during

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over

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6 years. Looking at the

last

category which is plastic

waste

it appeared comparatively the latest and started slowly increasing up to 10

precent

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per cent

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the

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2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:

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recycled
materials
increased
paper and cardboard
plastic
glass
metal
significant increase
relatively stable
fluctuating
period
starting
reaching
gradually increasing
remained low
experienced
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