The map below shows the changes that have taken palce at the waterfront area of a town calles Darwin between 2009 and 2014.
The maps illustrate how the waterfront
area
in Darwin changed over the 4-year period. Use synonyms
It is clear that
most of the industrial areas have been turned into forests and residential areas.Linking Words
In addition
, the Linking Words
town
’s infrastructure was Use synonyms
also
renovated with the addition of Linking Words
a
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apply
harbors
and more footpaths. Looking at Change the spelling
harbours
map
1 , we can see that the major part of the Capitalize word
Map
town
was covered by the industrial Use synonyms
area
.To the north of Use synonyms
this
building was a lake, some trees and Linking Words
industrial
Correct article usage
an industrial
area
.There was Use synonyms
also
a footpath which encircled the centre of the Linking Words
town
. There were two swimming pools beside the footpath and a fishing Use synonyms
area
In 2014, the industrial Use synonyms
area
was demolished to make room for a number of trees and amenities. In the North of the map, Use synonyms
while
the industrial Linking Words
area
has been replaced by the swimming pool, there were no Use synonyms
instead
of the school, convention centre and lake.In the centre of the Linking Words
town
, there are three residential buildings that have been built adjacent to the three old buildings. Use synonyms
In addition
,a university building was erected to the West of the Linking Words
area
.In the seashore of the Use synonyms
town
, a Use synonyms
Change the spelling
harbours
harbors
was constructedChange the noun form
harbor
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