You have gained admission in a prestigious college. Now you have to arrange for the accommodation. write a letter to the college authorities stating your likes and dislike in the choice of food and accommodation.

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Dear college authorities, Hope

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Firstly

I would love to thank you for the opportunity you gave me, for me, it is an

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THE SPELLING honour The spelling of

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part of your prestigious college. There is only one thing that concerns me, and it regards my accommodation. I want to make you aware that for me it is not a big issue sharing my room with someone else, I like to have roommates and socialize with new people. But what I don't really like is to share the bathroom with

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many people. Is there any chance

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a room with private toilets? Regarding my food preferences,

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I have a difficult taste. I don't like cheeses and meat, given that I would prefer to have a diet, more vegetarian and

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. I want

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you that I have a severe allergy to peas and beans. Is it possible to arrange a food schedule based on my dietary preferences? Sorry for the

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I might cause you. Looking forward to start studying there. Kind regards Antonio Lecca

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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You have gained admission in a prestigious college. Now you have to arrange for the accommodation. write a letter to the college authorities stating your likes and dislike in the choice of food and accommodation.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

“Prevention is better than the cure.” Researching and treating disease is too costly and so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extend do you agree?

Being able to purchase goods from any places in the planet has made nations around the world become almost identical. Do you think this is a possitive or negative development?

Modern appliances in the home have become more common, leaving no doubt that advances in technology have improved our lifestyle. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It’s generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance, music and sport and others are not. However, it’s sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sportsperson or musician. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+