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In some nations, the authorities cover the partial or entire educational fees for children in order to make literacy affordable. I believe the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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Educated
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society
 is very important for every
country
's growth. The future of a
country
 depends largely on that. Many countries pay the educational expenses of the
children
 of their
country
 partially or fully to make schooling affordable, and I believe
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 impacts are more when compared to the negatives. Considering
firstly
 the negatives of free
education
, an important one is the devaluation of
education
 among
the
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students.
This
 is because it reduces the sincere approach to studies from the
children
 as they are not answerable to their
parents
 as they are not funding their studies. In
case
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the case
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 of
education
 funded by
parents
children
 will have a moral responsibility to study well as they are studying with hard earned money
of
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 their
parents
. Contract with
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these
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government funded
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government-funded
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 studies, the
government
 would not be able
look
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 after the study interests of every
children
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child
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wgich
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which
 would affect the quality of
education
.
However
, it is the responsibility of every
government
 to make sure their future generations receive proper
education
.
This
 is because every nation depends on
the
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technological advancements and infrastructure developments which is possible only through an educated
society
.
For instance
,
Finland
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Finland's
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government
 provides free
education
 to all their citizens which resulted in massive growth for
their
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the
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country
 both
technological
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technologically
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 wise
as well as
infrastructure wise
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infrastructure-wise
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.
The free
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education
 would
also
 provide an equal
oppurtunity
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opportunity
 to
children
 from all classes of
the
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society
 and
this
 would
also
 help to eliminate the
discriminations
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discrimination
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 in
the
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society
.
Conversely
, if the
parents
 needed to fund their
children
's
education
 the quality of
education
 will be different for the different classes of the
society
. In conclusion, the advantage of growth of the
country
 and reducing the
discriminations
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discrimination
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 among its citizens outweigh the disadvantage of depreciating the value of
education
.
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