The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 amd 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compparisons where relevent.
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The chart depicts the amount of money a
country's
exports in different product categories from 2015 to 2016. The table illustrates the comparison of two Change noun form
country
years’s
percentage change in values.
It is obvious the percentage of Remove the s
years’
the
Petroleum products and engineered goods is the two highest in both 2015 and 2016 among the five categories, Correct article usage
apply
while
the figure
for textiles in change has the highest.
In details
, earnings from exporting Petroleum Fix the agreement mistake
detail
product
scored the top one place, Fix the agreement mistake
products
contributed
over 60 Wrong verb form
contributing
billions
in both Change to singular
billion
year
. Change to a plural noun
years
Gemsand
jewellery Correct your spelling
Gems and
are
the only Change the verb form
is
one
category out of five that show a Correct pronoun usage
apply
dowenard
trend in the Correct your spelling
downward
figure
, from approximately 42 per cent 2015
Change preposition
in 2015
of
Change preposition
apply
decrease
in values.
The Correct article usage
a decrease
figure
for textiles has increased dramatically from 2015 to 2016, contributed
15.24 per cent of Wrong verb form
contributing
rise
comparing the two years. The percentage of the increase Correct article usage
the rise
of
agricultural products is the lowest(0.8%), which is the only Change preposition
in
figure
that lower
1 per cent of growth among the other categories.Change the verb form
lowers
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