Some people believe today that everyone has a right to access to the Internet and that governments should provide this access for free. Other people believe that access to the internet is not a right and should be paid for like other services. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Nowadays, surfing on the
internet
is one of the most significant
activity
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modern human beings perform
while
shopping, learning, sharing information and joining social media online. The question arises whether
this
access
should be free and be provided by
government
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, or,
in
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contrary
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, it should be a regular personal expenditure.
Internet
access
is one of the common shares of the money
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on everyday items like mobile phones, television, nutrition, housing, clothes and transportation. As for any other
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there is no reasonable argument why you should not pay for going online by yourself. Elderly people might not even find it essential
consequently
they will probably spare their money
as
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abstaining from
an
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internet
access
.
On the other hand
, the whole world is benefiting from the
internet
making life easier and more comfortable as giving you the possibility to
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fast and convenient management of your business, online banking, education, information and numerous other items.
In addition
, areas with a lower income in comparison to richer ones might not be capable of affording
a
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proper
internet
access
.
This
fact might have an adverse impact on children, students and employees. As a case in point, the corona pandemic revealed that youngsters with
an
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insufficient
access
to the
internet
were not able to keep up with education during homeschooling.
This
commonly appeared in families with a low income.
Furthermore
, slower
internet
is an undeniable circumstance comparing the countryside to the cities. Usually, tiny villages are not adequately supplied with sufficient
internet
. Those inhabitants exhibit disadvantages if politicians fail to manage the widespread construction of wired
connection
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connections
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.
That is
also
a reason why young grown-ups leave their
home-towns
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with the result of diminishing infrastructures and
work forces
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in these areas.
Although
you can find pros and cons for both positions, I am a strong advocate for
a
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gratis
access
to the
internet
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.
Finally
,
this
will result in more equitable opportunities in society and
therefore
in flourishing economies, open-minded residents and a pleasant living atmosphere.
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