You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about: what course are you doing now why you are not satisfied with that course what course you would like to change to.
Respected Sir,
This
is regarding a course
I have taken up in your institute a month ago. I have taken up basic
computer Correct article usage
a basic
course
for 3 months. I was introduced to this
when I visited the college to inquire about a course
.
I have been doing this
course
since 5th
of Correct article usage
the 5th
last
month. First of all, the course
content is very basic and I am almost aware about
it. Change the preposition
of
Secondly
, I was told when I enrolled in for
that it is very important to know about all Change preposition
apply
that is
there in the programme to do for Correct article usage
an advance
advance
Replace the word
advanced
course
. Apart from all these, the tutors who teach us just leave the computer lab after showing it what needs to be done in a particular chapter and assign
the task.
Wrong verb form
assigning
Moreover
, I've gone though
the Correct your spelling
through
advance
Replace the word
advanced
course
running in our institute and would like to enroll for that as it will be beneficial for me and my
career I am looking for in Change the word
the
this
field. I've paid 30 thousands
for three months. I request you to kindly deduct 1.5 months Change to singular
thousand
course
and refund me with
the balance amount or compensate Change preposition
apply
the
remaining money Correct pronoun usage
me the
in
the Change preposition
for
course
I am planning to do it
in it. I even Correct pronoun usage
apply
have
enquired about the Unnecessary verb
apply
seats
availability and I was told there are still two seats available.
Kindly, do the needful favouring me doing the needful.
Yours Obediently,
Akshay.Change the noun form
seat
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,