The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006
Three out of four platforms of video
games
rose each year, leading to a significant rise in total global revenue over the 7-year. Sales figures for handheld Use synonyms
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in
almost every year.
In 2000, Change preposition
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the
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games
’ sales reached just almost 11 Use synonyms
billion
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while
console Linking Words
games
were about 6 million. Meanwhile, the other three Use synonyms
games
did not have figures in that year, especially mobile phone ones. Until 2004, online and cell phone Use synonyms
games
became more popular, with sales reaching around $3 Use synonyms
billion
.
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7-year
, there was a fluctuation among most digital Correct your spelling
7 years
games
, except handheld Use synonyms
games
, which kept steadily increasing until it reached nearly 18 Use synonyms
billion
dollars in 2006. Use synonyms
However
, console Linking Words
games
decline to be the lowest income, at about 2 Use synonyms
billion
dollars. At the same time, cell phones and online Use synonyms
games
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were
showed a significant increase to more than 5 Unnecessary verb
apply
billion
dollars in 2006.Use synonyms
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