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The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#information #species #summarise #features #comparisons
The chart illustrates that percentage of species
utilized
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that utilized
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 animals experiences in U.Sr
like
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apply
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,
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apply
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Rabbits ,Hamsters ,sheep ,primates and pigs. from the
overall
 perspective ,the more proportion era of using
are
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is
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a Rabbits on test experiences it is the highest one compering with others
catogries
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categories
.
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according
acorrding
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According
 to chart data most of
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the
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testing
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done
doning
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done
 by
a
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apply
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Rabbits
it
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apply
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is nearly 38.7
experience
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experienced
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in
US
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the US
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 ,
whereas
 , the
reat
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rate
rest
 of
utilized
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utilisation
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 of sheep decline downward
in
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 zero
percentage
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per cent
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 .
however
 Hamsters was become the second type of testing at figure 27.7% ,
while
 primates and pigs
has
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have
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 the
equall proprtion
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equal proportion
 of use .
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