chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possibleJob in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter • remind him when and where you met • tell him what kind of Job youaare inter,sted in • say why you think you would be suitable for theJob

Dear Mr Sharma, I hope you are doing well. My name is Sukhwinder kaur Ranu. We caught up on the domestic flight from Vancouver to Cranbrook on the 28th of March 2023, when you were coming back from a business convention .I contact you because I am looking forward to upgrading my career as a head chef these days . I wonder if you have any suitable jobs for me. I have been working as a line cook for the

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5 years . Cooking is my passion and I have a dab hand at it. Unfortunately, my current position is not appropriate as per my experience and skills.

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, I am looking for a new challenging position to polish my skills. I think you told me that you are going to open a new food outlet in my hometown too. I think you might need a staff for the restaurant . I hold sufficient experience and all the required food certifications ,which might be good suits for the position . I have attached my resume and certification with

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letter . If you think fits, you can contact me for more information

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I am ready for an interview . Thanks for your consideration. I am looking forward to your response. Regards, Sukhwinder

ranusukh77

Jul 19, 2023

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