The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

You should write at least 150 words.
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the graph illustrates data about
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rate of tourists visiting the museum during two sessions namely, summer and winter throughout the period of 2003.
overall
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,
it is clear that
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the figure witnessed a
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downward
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in summer the
number
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of
visitors
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are
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higher than
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the
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of
visitors
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in winter. During summer 2003, the tourists accounted for 600
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person
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at 9:00 AM in the morning.
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the
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of
visitors
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who
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to the museum in the afternoon period are increased sharply to 1500
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approximately. afterwards, the
number
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of people begin of decreasing
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steadily
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steadily
until they
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reached
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reached
around 900
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at 16:00 PM.
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the figure experienced a plummet untill the
visitors
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reached 200
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only at 17:00 Am.
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people in winter 2003, the numbed of
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in the morning was double incresed from 200 to 400
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in the first one hour of opining the museum.
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the tourists rate was fluctuating between 10:00AM to 12:PM to reach 600
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eventually.
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the
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of
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dropped rapidly to 200
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at 14:30 PM. after that the
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rate remained constant from 15:00 PM to 18:00 and accounted for 100
person
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, person with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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