The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

You should write at least 150 words.
the graph illustrates data about
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rate of tourists visiting the museum during two sessions namely, summer and winter throughout the period of 2003.
overall
,
it is clear that
the figure witnessed a
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downward
downwards
trend.
as
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in summer the
number
of
visitors
are
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higher than
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the
number
of
visitors
in winter. During summer 2003, the tourists accounted for 600
person
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people
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at 9:00 AM in the morning.
then
the
number
of
visitors
who
are comes
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to the museum in the afternoon period are increased sharply to 1500
person
approximately. afterwards, the
number
of people begin of decreasing
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steadily
steadly
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steadily
until they
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reached
reched
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reached
around 900
person
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at 16:00 PM.
then
the figure experienced a plummet untill the
visitors
reached 200
person
only at 17:00 Am.
while
people in winter 2003, the numbed of
visitors
in the morning was double incresed from 200 to 400
person
in the first one hour of opining the museum.
then
the tourists rate was fluctuating between 10:00AM to 12:PM to reach 600
person
eventually.
then
the
number
of
visitors
dropped rapidly to 200
person
at 14:30 PM. after that the
visitors
rate remained constant from 15:00 PM to 18:00 and accounted for 100
person
.
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