The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
the graph illustrates data about
average
rate of tourists visiting the museum during two sessions namely, summer and winter throughout the period of 2003.
Add an article
the average
an average
overall
, it is clear that
the figure witnessed a downwords
trend. Correct your spelling
downward
downwards
as
in summer the Capitalize word
As
number
of visitors
are
higher than Change the verb form
is
rhe
Correct your spelling
the
number
of visitors
in winter.
During summer 2003, the tourists accounted for 600 person
at 9:00 AM in the morning.Change to a plural noun
people
then
the number
of visitors
who are comes
to the museum in the afternoon period are increased sharply to 1500 Change the verb form
come
person
approximately. afterwards, the number
of people begin of decreasing Correct your spelling
steadily
steadly
until they Correct your spelling
steadily
Correct your spelling
reached
reched
around 900 Correct your spelling
reached
person
at 16:00 PM. Change to a plural noun
people
then
the figure experienced a plummet untill the visitors
reached 200 person
only at 17:00 Am.
while
people in winter 2003, the numbed of visitors
in the morning was double incresed from 200 to 400 person
in the first one hour of opining the museum. then
the tourists rate was fluctuating between 10:00AM to 12:PM to reach 600 person
eventually. then
the number
of visitors
dropped rapidly to 200 person
at 14:30 PM. after that the visitors
rate remained constant from 15:00 PM to 18:00 and accounted for 100 person
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