The pie chart shows women in poverty in the United States and bar chart compares poverty rates by gender.
The two charts illustrate the rate of
woman
in poverty in different household Fix the agreement mistake
women
composition
and the level of poverty by sex and Fix the agreement mistake
compositions
age
. Generally speaking, the majority of poor woman
are single Fix the agreement mistake
women
woman
without Fix the agreement mistake
women
children
, followed by singsle
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children
. In terms of gender and age
, both gender
in the non-working Change to a plural noun
genders
age
have the highest trend in poverty, this
figure
decreased by
time and rose again at the Change preposition
over
retire
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age
.
A closer look at the pie chart reveals that more than a
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woman
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figures
single
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a single
woman
with no Fix the agreement mistake
women
children
dependent, which was 54%. This
figure
was 28% more than that figure
of poor woman
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women
children
. Only 20% married
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lived in poor in 2008. Particularly, only 12% of Fix the agreement mistake
women
married
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a married
woman
with Fix the agreement mistake
women
children
dependent and 8% of those without childeren
was poor.
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children
under
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the under
age
group had the highest poor rate in the chart: more than 20%. This
figure
for both men and woman
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women
then
slighly
dropped until the Correct your spelling
slightly
age
of 45 - 54 to 6% and 7% respectively. Only the figure
of
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women
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the 18
age
group did not follow the trend when there was more than 20% of poor rate, which was equal to the figure
of
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the under
year old
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year-old
retire
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retirement
age
, the figure
of
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for
woman
generally increased to 15%, Fix the agreement mistake
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Vocabulary: Replace the words woman, age, children, figure with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 9 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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